The very first.

Something i came up with a long time ago.

It was when i was going through this phase of loneliness involving someone. I just thought about when there was no enlightenment. No theories. No sense of time. It was meant to be a poem...but didn't turn out to be one.


-Hours and minutes were unheard of at that point of history
-The bipeds were confused by the sight.
-the white speck in the night sky was the biggest that they remember seeing.
-Their minds try to recollect a vision of it from previous nights
-They fail to do so because the speck wasn't any different from the billion other specks in the past night skies.
-They would growl and chatter while the comet kept hurtling towards them at cosmic speeds.
-The omnious glow in the sky kept getting bigger every night until it had begun to be visible even in the daytime.
-The quadrapeds were blissfully ignorant, only sparing a instinctive glance at the object when it seemed to move in the corner of their eye,
-But the intelligents; the intelligents would stare up at the sky for hours, their minds unable to process what the slowly expanding dark object was.
-They now knew that the object which definitely was smaller during the last time of light, had turned larger when they awoke from their rest.
-Days of incomprehension and bafflement pass as the intelligents begin to grow restless and frightened.
-As the day of reckoning arrived, the intelligents began to see craters and canyons on the now darkish blue object which had now become a sizeable portion of their sky.
-Eventually, only a small sliver of light had snuck around the corners of the sky, preventing total darkness. But it provided no comfort to the hysterical creatures.
-Day becomes night while night stays night, as the tiny period of total darkness occurs.
-Now, man and animal alike completely lose hope, and just in time. The planet then exploded.
-Parts of it hitched a ride as the comet continued its unending deep space voyage, path unhindered by its encounter with Earth.

I imagined this to be part of a miniature script.